Monday, January 26, 2009

^^Oregon^Essay^^

The picture that I took was of the capitol building. Everyday in that building many events take place. For example, that is where laws are made, it is where legislation takes place, etc. To people Salem is a city that is important to see, because of the capitol building, and the goldman. Then to other people that have lived in Salem either most of their life or all of their life, the capitol is just another building that is surrounded by many trees.

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

!!Complex Sentence Combining!!

  • Cole shuddered, as he had another spasm, with chills, and Rosy shoved Edwin, but the shove was light.
  • He sipped water, as the water was in the glass, so she held the glass to his lips, while he struggled to swallow the pills.
  • Cole closed his eyes, as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his wounds, while his wounds were still open.

Tuesday, January 6, 2009

.Sentence.Correcting.

1. His daughter asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.

2. The fog was thick, and it was hard to see.

3. He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.

4. He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.

5. Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didnt help.

6. He gets upset when he thinks about the war.